THE BULLET TRAIN by R. DAVID FULCHER

The Bullet Train

By R. David Fulcher

The long flight from New York to Frankfurt had left me tired and feeling disheveled.  As a private investigator, I instinctively felt for the reassuring bulge of my snub nosed .38 revolver under my left shoulder, only to remind myself I had left my piece back in the Big Apple before taking my vacation.

I hadn’t gotten a break in over five years, not since Delores had convinced me to take her to the Bahamas.  I should’ve known she would split right after the trip.  This time was different—just me, myself, and I.  If I wanted to drink beer at a biergarten all day I could, or rent a car and speed down the Autobahn, I could do that as well.  It was almost too good to be true.

I was glad to finally board The Bullet Train when I found the right platform and even more glad to find an abandoned cabin.  The Germans didn’t call it The Bullet Train of course—they called it an IC or Inter-City Express.  It was called that because it didn’t stop at any of the smaller stations between the starting point and the destination.  I called it The Bullet Train because I was impressed by the pictures of the high-speed Japanese trains many years ago, and the term just stuck with me.

This particular train was travelling between Frankfurt and Darmstadt.  I wanted to start my vacation in Germany in Darmstadt as it was picturesque, and small by big city standards, and believe me I’ve had enough of big cities.

I had just lowered my hat over my eyes and propped up my feet when I heard the cabin door slide open.

Just my luck, I thought, until I opened my eyes.

In front of me was a knockout redhead.  She was easily over six feet tall, with a figure that was somehow curvy and trim at the same time.  She had full pouty lips, a slightly upturned nose, and eyes that seemed to change between different hues of green when the light caught them.

“Do you mind if I share the cabin with you?” she asked.  She didn’t sound German, but she also didn’t sound American.  The only word that came to mind was that she sounded cultured.

“Of course not.  I’m Nick Jansky.  Pleasure to meet you,” I said, sitting up and extending my hand.    I felt a spark when she lightly clasped my hand in return.

“The pleasure is all mine,” she replied, taking the opposite seat.  I didn’t escape my attention that she hadn’t offered her name in reply.  I didn’t overthink it, however.  In my line of work I had learned that people may prefer to remain anonymous for any number of reasons.  In her case, I was pretty sure a man was involved.

“Are you from Frankfurt?” I asked as the train got rolling. 

“I’m a bit from all over, I guess you could say,” she said, laughing slightly at her own joke.

She was taking her anonymity seriously.  Despite her allure, it has been a long flight, and I wasn’t in the mood for games.

“Well enjoy the trip, Miss,” I said, lowering my hat back down over my eyes.  She seemed disappointed that I was no longer playing along.

The gentle vibrations of the tracks helped to quickly lull me into sleep, and I wasn’t sure how long I had been out before I felt a slight tap on my knee.

“Nick?” She asked.

I sat up, still groggy and unsure of my surroundings.  The urban feel of Frankfurt had given way to rolling hills and quaint towns.

“Yes?” I replied, lifting my hat.

She seemed anxious and vulnerable now, no longer exuding the confident demeanor she previously exhibited, and she was squeezing her handbag for apparent comfort.

“I haven’t been entirely honest with you,” she began.

“Well, how bad could it be?  We’ve just met!”  I exclaimed.

This made her show a forced smile, and she clasped my hands.  Again, I felt the spark, a shiver that coursed through my being when she touched me.

“You’re kind.  I didn’t expect that,” she said, looking out the window at the landscape rolling past.  Again the sunlight caught her eyes and they seemed to shift like currents in the ocean.

“What do you mean you didn’t expect that?” I inquired.

“Ok, here’s the honest truth.  I saw you on the platform and followed you to this car.  You seemed like a man who…well, who could handle himself.”

“Are you in some kind of trouble?” I asked, looking directly into her shape-shifting eyes.

“Yes.  There is a man following me.  I think he’s from the government.  I think he wants to kill me,” she blurted out.

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WELCOME TO CRIME MONTH

June is “Crime Month,” and we want to hear from you! What’s your favorite mystery novel of all time?

Aside from the books we’ve published here, mine just might be A LITTLE YELLOW DOG.

Leave a comment with your favorite below, and one lucky respondent will get a print copy of the Hawkshaw Press book of their choice! (Winner chosen and notified July 1st!)

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Romance, grief, and mystery coalesce in a satisfying manner as Patsy pulls on threads of truth that lead to better understanding her own heart.

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We are excited to extend an invitation to you for the inaugural Current Words One-And-Done Session—an exclusive opportunity designed for fiction and memoir writers to refine their skills within a supportive setting, and the best part is, it’s entirely free!

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Registration: To secure your spot, submit a portion of your writing (between 450-550 words) for live discussion. Please email your selection to workshops@currentwords.com by January 20, 2024, to be considered for the February 3rd workshop. Include your full name, city, state, and the type of work you are developing (short stories, long-form fiction, memoir) in your application. Enrollment is on a first-come, first-served basis due to limited space. Upon confirmation of your enrollment, you will receive an email containing further instructions and the meeting URL. Participants must be willing to join a Zoom call and have their work constructively discussed in a small-group setting. Please commit to attending if you sign up, as there are very limited spaces available.

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WELCOME TO CRIME MONTH

In Los Angeles we call June “June Gloom,” as the mist hangs over the day… all day, and we bask in the last moments of companionable weather before the big heat comes.

But in the larger world June is CRIME MONTH! Time to get into your great reads!

I have to take a moment to recommend a Los Angeles detective, Easy Rawlins, for your June read. There are many books by the wonderful Walter Mosley, but I suggest you start off the way I always started off my students when I would teach Mr. Mosley: with A LITTLE YELLOW DOG.

In A LITTLE YELLOW DOG Easy has gotten himself a job running the janitorial crew at a public school, and he’s doing all right, that is until a very beautiful teacher pleads with him to help her save her dog from her husband, who wants the yellow mongrel dead. It’s been a long time since Easy held a beautiful woman, and he’s not made of stone. And she, well, she will do anything for her little dog.
And so Easy first finds himself deep into a woman, then deep into a mystery, and stuck with a nasty little mutt that hates his guts.
Can Easy save the mutt, save the woman, and save his skin?

One of the things I always discussed with my students was the hot sex scene that happens in the first pages of the book. It is titillating that’s for sure. And we talked about the things that authors put in books, like sex, violence, obscenities, animals, religion, graft, ghouls, murder….! How do we decide, as readers, whether those things in the books we read are gratuitous, or necessary? How do we decide if they add to the plot, and the story, enrich the story, or if they’re just in there to get attention: all splash no substance? I can tell you that I tend to poo-poo romance novels and the like, but the trouble Easy gets himself into is, in my humble opinion, both sexy and plot-centric. And I have read that book many times now, over my long years of teaching people to write. It works. And the greater story works around the sex scene. The scene and the story arc compliment each other, grow each other. And Mosley also does a wonderful portrayal of life for people in Los Angeles in the 40s, 50s, and 60s. To be a Black man trying to live on your own terms was not, in contrast to the character’s name, easy. It’s a well-documented fact that Los Angeles policing has long had its issues with racial profiling, issues that still continue today. Mosley writes his story so that I feel like I’m walking in Easy’s shoes, and I see how careful each step must be. It’s when you see how tough it can be for a good man to even get dinner on the table without being harassed that you understand how far society has come, and still needs to go. This, in my view, makes Mosely not just a great author, but an important one. And you know what else? I’m gonna channel Tom, from my favorite restaurant back in Philly, “I’ll make you a promise, if you like hard boiled detective novels, you’re gonna love this book, and if you don’t, I’ll take it in the back, and read it myself, no charge.”

😉

Start crime month off right. Read A LITTLE YELLOW DOG. And drop back to visit the blog at Hawkshaw Press, as we bring our authors on in videos all month long to tell you about their favorites for crime month!

Here’s mud in your eye~

Dianne

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THE NEW HAWK

As we move further into 2023, we realized it was time to redo the Hawkshaw Press site (home of our crime fiction novels and collections). The site has gotten a fresh makeover, and we’ll be updating Gravelight and Out of This World soon as well.

Meanwhile, please drop by Hawkshaw Press and meander a while, Flatfoot.

CALL FOR SHORT STORIES

Welcome to HARDBOILED AND LOADED WITH SIN, the new anthology series by Hawkshaw Press. First issue drops SUMMER 2023.

Here’s the deets:

Fiction only.

Short stories 1500-7,500 words. If yours is longer send us a query @ publisher at Devil’s Party Press dot com.

12 pt New Times Roman, double-spaced.

Authors over 40 only.

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FEE: 10 bucks

PAYMENT: All authors selected for publication receive a one-time royalty of 25 bucks, a copy of the anthology, and our semi-undying love.

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